I like what you've written of this story so far. Your OCs are interesting, and your version of the canon characters we've seen fits. I'm curious about Matthews - how much does he know, and how does he know it? - and how the connection between Middle earth and our world works. Parts of the story have made me laugh, while still fitting with the rest of it. One thing I would appreciate is a note someplace about how the ranks of the officers are related. I hope that you intend to write more of this!
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 Reviewer:sqrt(-1) Date:July 28, 2005 12:22 AM
This story gets more interesting with every chapter. I like seeing what's happening in so many places and from different perspectives. So Curunir is already less than good? And Matthews looks like Eonwe! I wondered, but had dismissed that possibility. Thank you for the explanatory notes, they've been appreciated. I'm looking forward to continueing this story.
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