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Suddenly, Nerdanel awoke, and a terrible agony exploded in her fŽa. Tears coursed down her cheeks unchecked as awareness dawned on her. Feeling Tyelkormoís powerful spirit leaving his ruined hrŲa astounded her in anguish. Fair as the stars, yet fierce tempered, Celegorm was gone, cursed and never to return from Namo.
Then, another sharp pain flooded her senses and she knew that her dark one had departed as well. In her mind, the crimson currents, his final resting place surfaced. ĎCaranthir, my dear son, I will never hear your deep laughter again.í
Then, the final blow tore her fŽa asunder: her mournful cries filled the air when she felt AtarinkŽ slip away. So like FŽanor, Curufin was full of unquenchable fire, yet, he squandered his staggering skill to fight a war not of his making.
ĎOh FŽanor, how could you bring such splendor to life and to ruin? Could you not see that your most remarkable creations were the ones we created together? Seven unique, flawed, yet luminescent beings, once pure before the merciless whores of your handiwork robbed them of their senses, driven mad by your cursed oath. Left behind, I mourn three eternal flames that have been extinguished.í
NiŽramilo - Quenya Tears of the mother
AtarinkŽ - little father
Tyelkormo - hasty riser