Marta, I love this. It is a different take on this scenario than anything I have seen. I like the idea that Aragorn got to know Halbarad because he was fostered in Rivendell too. That makes the secrecy even more difficult to bear.
One nitpick in one of the last paragraphs I think you used Halbeleg instead of Halbarad.
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