Intricate and fascinating story of a time and place not often visited by Tolkien fanfic writers. (and especially chilling account of the spread of Melkor-worship)
Looking forward to seeing more of the saga.
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 Reviewer:Littlehobbitlost Date:August 25, 2007 4:39 PM
Just a wee email to say that I'm reading this series and doubt I'm the only one. I think it's really fantastic and your writing is great. I'm hoping it goes a long way!
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 Reviewer:Raksha06 Date:September 15, 2007 5:05 AM
Well, I'm still reading...
Stories archived here, at least many of them, don't get a large amount of reviews by comparison to StoriesofArda.com or Fanfiction.net. And from what I can tell, Numenor (and much of the Second Age) is one of the least popular subjects for Tolkien fanfiction stories, though in my opinion it is a fascinating subject.
You're doing a good job with the story; and it certainly holds my attention. I am wondering if Zarhil and Inzalidun's marriage will always remain one of convenience, or if they will ever come to love each other...
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 Reviewer:Raksha The Demon Date:December 25, 2007 6:45 AM
That kid is going to be soooooooo spoiled, far more so than little Zimraphel-Miriel. Excellent extrapolation on Ar-Pharazon's epithet of "The Golden".
I still don't quite understand who killed Inzalidun and Zarhil's son - was the infant killed by grandfather, uncle or aunt?
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