Oh, these are terrible and cold visions. I felt such pity for Miriel. Was she just naturally timid in your mind, or overly sheltered by her family? Your descriptions made me think of someone frightened in the dark, reaching out to the first brightness that drives their fears away, even if it is an unhealthy or dangerous light. Little by little, she is drawn in until there is no turning back...
Well done, and I look forward to the alternate version you are working on.
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 Reviewer:Maeve Date:February 8, 2007 7:17 PM
Thank you for reviewing, Denise!
I am impressed- I posted this here, not too sure, wondering if anyone would manage to get the point at all, since I had just gone, taken a fic that did not go too well and cut it to pieces on top of this. But I must say that you got the point perfectly... almost better than I ever did! Frightened of the dark and drawn to a dangerous light, indeed. ;)
I will start publishing my large fic soon (as soon as I manage to find a title *cough*) But I must say that it begins with Inzilbŕth and Gimilz˘r, and that Zimraphel doesn┤t appear until the last third.
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