Ah, smut is good. Smut between long-time marrieds is even better. Very enjoyable!
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 Reviewer:Denise Date:February 15, 2006 9:57 PM
Most excellent! Very well-written smut. It drew me right in, and I loved the light-hearted play between the two of them. Surely they had such happiness together, before Fëanáro's obsession with the Silmarils began...
I heartily second Isabeau's comment - being a long-time married person myself, I especially enjoy good smut between couples in the same situation, and parents besides. Thank you!
The only part that caught my attention was the phrase "...Fëanáro glimpsed the top of her breasts, still full after giving birth to two of his sons." It presupposes that they will have more sons, which they wouldn't really have known yet. (Although the night that is promised certainly points to at least one more future child!) Maybe "after giving birth to his two sons"?
Great writing! I hope real life lets you continue the Fëanáro/Nerdanel saga soon.
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