I liked the atmosphere in that a lot. I also liked your description of the hands, but it seemed a bit awkwardly placed. Otherwise: Kudos! Nice work. See ya onlist, ~morelindo
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Story I liked the atmosphere in that a lot. I also liked your description of the hands, but it seemed a bit awkwardly placed. Otherwise: Kudos! Nice work. See ya onlist, ~morelindo Report this review, #485, for abuse of site guidelines.(Opens new window) |
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