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Beware the Sea
by:Marta
 [1] Reviewer:Vistula Date:August 18, 2005 3:16 AM
Hi Marta,

These are really well done. I particularly love the Legolas one. And in the Alqualonde one, I really felt this line: 'But ash catches in my throat, blackened stone imposes itself on memory unmarred.' Very moving!

Only one problem...in your Sam drabble you have him say that Merry and Pippin are gone and dead, but they didn't even leave the Shire until two years after Sam left for the Havens.

Otherwise, they are all well done.

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 [2] Reviewer:Marta Date:August 19, 2005 3:53 AM
Hey Vistula,

Thanks for your feedback -- glad you liked it! As to the Sam drabble, someone polinted out that fact over at SOA. I was sure Merry and Pippin left before Sam did, but I've since checked the Appendices and you're right. I guess things can slip past any of us.

I'll rework that drabble this weekend. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.

Marta

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