I like how you changed the end so that you still have the first part of each ?stanza there, but changed a little so that they rhyme.
I really like this. Can't help you with a tune, but it's great!
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 Reviewer:Rous Date:April 5, 2005 8:18 AM
I am not sure how this would be as a nursery rhyme, but as a teaching tool, it would work quite well. It is even in a sing-song way. Thank you for sharing.
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