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 [1] Reviewer:saermelui Date:November 24, 2004 10:01 AM
I thought your method of getting Eomer and Elladan in bed was creative. I really appreciated that you kept Elladan masculine, instead of lowering him into the girly-man pit.

I was a little uncomfortable with the level of discomfort Eomer had at engaging in the tryst, and a little creeped out at Elladan's insistance that the fee be sex. Perhaps if Elladan had used more glamor and begiuile instead of pressure.
At least Eomer got into it after a while.

Well written in general, The sex scenes were interesting a different from each other. It made an enjoyable read.


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