Lovely. Your poetry stood up well to the beauty of that particular part of the Silm.
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 Reviewer:elanor of aquitana Date:November 5, 2004 4:17 PM
Only after second reading I understood that this is Morgoth speaking. Somehow there is not enough rage involved for me to identify him. But probably this is Melkor before the fall slowly realizing his desires. The arc of the poem is perfect as soon as one realizes who speaks.
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