Wow. That about sums it up. I liked the imagery. It evoked the doubts one should feel embarking upon the journey of raising a child. And his likening the rearing of children to shipbuilding and sailing. Very apropo. I did notice one typo towards the end, I cannot remember exactly where, but if you re-read it, you will find it. Otherwise, well done, and I look forward to more of this.
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