I like how you made legolas a bit more of a tough guy, but I don't think Aragorn would have been tempted in lorien. If he would have been it would have happened back in Bree when he could have easily snatched the ring when no one was there to stop him. You seem to have let a little bit of movie Aragorn, who was over concerned with Isulder, slip in to the story.
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