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Reconciliation

By:Dwimordene
 May, 4 2007

A journal for discussion of the story "Reconciliation."

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Just what the hook says. I will try actually to reply to any comments in this journal.


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Wonderful chapter, Dwim. Yes, it was on time on Friday, though for me it usually is here late Thursday night and so I was despairing that night! :) It's just a sign of how much I'm enjoying the story, though.

I was glad to see that Pel, Elya, and Andra finally talked, if not about the beating directly, then at least about why and who might want them out - almost everyone it sounds like! Though I know that is not true, there are always a large silent group of people who don't want to rock the boat either way and so say nothing.

I was glad that Elya finally apologized to Andra and that he didn't do it on the beach, but that he did it in front of the officers was quiet courageous on his part. Perhaps he will be able to recover from all of this, being a Swan Knight like Adrahil wants him to do seems difficult. Oh, and it's a relief that the three of them did finally come to a resolution about the beating and that there is nothing more between them regarding that... hopefully the three of them can move on now.

Pel was so right, how could ALL of that have happened? Little things add up over time and you don't even realize it until you look back at it like they're doing... you just become used to it in order to survive.

I was wondering when Adrahil or someone would discuss their part in what was going on - well, not so much Adrahil's part as Ornedil's and the other officers. I remember in Kin-Strife how Ornedil did not want Andra there at all because he would be a bad influence on Imrahil. That attitude had to leak over to the Swan Knights and that doesn't even take into account their not-so-subtle punishment of Pel and Elya when they came back.

Well, I've gone on way too long here! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

By the way, the formatting is bad again! If it's not too much trouble, could you upload it again because I print these out and put them in a binder to read again. :)


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