Reconciliation

By:Dwimordene
 May, 4 2007


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Comment:
Oh, very glad to see Elya is alive and that hopefully he can now get help. This is my favorite scene - out of many favorites! :)

[snip scene]

I like the images you show there of the pain that Elya is going through and has been going through for such a long time... we know that but seeing it here through Pel's eyes is just moving and it made me tear up for some reason. I just so feel for these guys in such a tough situation.

I'm pleased that that worked out so well. It took quite a few drafts and a lot of revision to get it into that form, but I felt we needed some sense of just how deeply Elethil has been wounded, and at what level his vulnerabilities lie. They're not superficial, so it will take some work to dig him out of his personal hole.

I also really liked when Orenedil made the comment that Pel wouldn't have failed if he had felt he could trust any of his brothers.

Somehow all my Unabeauverse stories seem to end up being about becoming isolated and then emerging from isolation...

It's so very true, there were so very few people he could go to in his time of need and that's a horrible place to be in and it's ironic that he ends up with the person that should be his bitterest enemy in such a situation.

But of course! I do have my own nefarious purposes, after all, heh heh, for as much as this chapter is about Peloren and Elethil, ultimately Peloren and Elethil are where they are because of something that happened between them and Andrahar.

Thanks for your comments!

TTFN,

Dwim

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