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Reconciliation

By:Dwimordene
 May, 4 2007

A journal for discussion of the story "Reconciliation."

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Just what the hook says. I will try actually to reply to any comments in this journal.


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Dwim Said: But at the moment, they can't be that rational about matters and getting absolutely smashed probably didn't help.

No, not really, I love this chapter so much.

I really wory about El though, he's having a rough time of it. I hope they start to get better soon, before he does somthing drastic he has no-where to turn, Pel has more friends and his horses, El has a bottle of dodgy boose (I think it's a contest between that and Damrod's brandy in Blackbow).

Andra is also great in this, his reaction to Imrahil's return, the way Imri put's him on the spot and how he struggles with t are great. He's grown up a lot in the last two years where as Imri has a way to go even after the whole dream thing, the way you write it is really good.

He still has a lot of growing up to do though, regards dealing with all three of them, me thinks Imri is his best friend but also his student and he is stuck between two cultures regarding P+E and somehow seems a bit out of his depth is dealing with them

I'm looking forwards to seeing how all this turns out, I can't wait for next Friday, dont supose we could have the next chapter early *Please*

Nargil

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