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Reconciliation

By:Dwimordene
 May, 4 2007

A journal for discussion of the story "Reconciliation."

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Just what the hook says. I will try actually to reply to any comments in this journal.


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Do Ornendil or the other officers ever clarify for Andrahar just how bad things have been for Peloren and Elethil? I mean, saying, "We had hoped the Prince's justice would suffice to convince others they had paid their debt, but it has not" does not even touch on the extra work the sergeants put on them, much less the cruelty of their peers.

Not that Andrahar is likely to say in return, "Oh, OK, you poor guys - I forgive you," but it would go a long way towards explaining the cringing that he's so disgusted by. It felt to me like the officers left Andrahar a bit too much in the dark about the past year, unless there's been more debriefing behind the scenes. But from the end of Ch. 4 it doesn't sound like it...

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