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Hethlin of Anorien
February, 25 2006
I know CMC's a done deal, but since I intend to give it a thorough editing in the future, I'll include it in this thread, as well as make this a place for any other Heth questions not appropriate for the Silver Swan thread.
Hi Isabeau, sorry this is a bit late, I'm working at a campin america at the moment so i don't get much time too read.
I thiught the last chapter fits perfectly with your Boromir, Faramir still see's her as a woman but Boromir doesn't see girls in that light anyway, much better to have them this way around.
I couldn't help but laugh at how things will play out now Heth's in the swannies, her and Esteven will have a good laugh over this, "do you remember when...." and Esteven can tell Andra about her early ranger days, if he ever want's too know.
Boromir's leutenant is great as well, it shows the scepticism in the army, and some of what Heth will have to deal with as a commander
All in all a great chapter, can't wait too read more,
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