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Princes of Dol Amroth
February, 25 2006
Questions about the life and times of Imrahil and his family can be asked here, including questions about Ultimatums, Kin-Strife and the shorter stories. Discussions about Brand can go either here or in the Best-Loved Son thread, since his stories sort of overlap both cycles.
More things I forgot to mention in my review (that happens if I don't give myself, as I usually do, time for re-reading and reflection before sending it off *sigh*):
I love Imrahil's absolute faith about his fate after death, and that Arwen doubts a little - foreshadows one of her low points in the Tale of A & A.
I had to grin how neatly you circumvented any further elaboration on "your" family and "our" family. But I did wonder when Imrahil only mentioned one grandson. I assume he was speaking about Alphros, but what about Elfwine?
What's this about the mention of Dale in the context of fighting? Is this one of Heth's future adventures? Perhaps even one of Faramir's or her visions?
Do you plan to publish "In All But Blood" as a separate story here on TFF some time?
One mistake I noticed: "we could have stayed home by our hearths with no one thinking the worst of us." It should say "worse", I think.
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