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The Best-Loved Son cycle
February, 23 2006
Anything dealing with this cycle of stories can be discussed here: Andra and Boromir as a couple, the Denethor/Imrahil/Andrahar rivalry, the politics of Gondor in the last days of the Third Age.
I will review when the story is finished (so as not to detract you from your writing *g*), but here just two quick comments:
- You misspelled Altariel in the prologue.
- What I wondered about was Brand's lack of emotional response to Imrahil's news of Elboron. He merely answered "politely". Isn't he excited, glad for Faramir & …owyn, curious about the baby etc.?
...very much loving the story so far - mean cliff-hanger included...
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