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Lossarnach Yule

 February, 22 2006

Any comments, suggestions for this story?

Did you expand the epilogue a bit Isabeau? I like that Mablung bought his daughter's bed from Idren. Mablung seems like the sort who would check in on those who were once in his charge. He's such a decent sort of guy.

More curiosity from me about how likely folks were to guess that Hethlin was a girl. Lorend's family's home was surely bigger than Idren's farmhouse but wouldn't there have been a risk that she'd be spotted while undressing or bathing, etc? Or was it an "open secret" that some people could be trusted with, and Mablung and Faramir knew the secret would be safe with Lorend's family if discovered?

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