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The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011

In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their sto

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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?


Comment:
re: clarity and ritual

Thinking back to when I first read the series back in March, Ailos' perspective really helped me follow along. It worked, at least for me. Getting descriptions from him helped me switch modes, as it were: since he does not know what is going on, either, the bits of info he gave made me keep an open mind about what the answers would be.

Also, when you had third parties come in, as you did in the last Drabble, that helped too.


Re: Jhanar's moment of strength

Yes, that is going to be hard. The only thing that occurs to me at the moment is that you find a way, somehow, to get him somewhere almost familiar where he can make a contribution, Now that they are in Pelargir, amongst other haradrim, could something happen that Jhanar figures out, etc.?


Re: Gondor identification via Ailos

That will be tough, too. I think I'll have to think about this some more.

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