The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011


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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?

Comment:
Did I mention the lack of direction I suffer from when it comes to this story? ;-)

:-) But you know what the story is about which is the hardest part. Now you just need to tune up the details :-)

The quote is fabulous. Maybe you can use that at some point for an epigraph?

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