The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011


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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?

Comment:
Who else would they have, if not each other?

That is part of what makes they situation so fascinating: they really are stuck together, aren't they? They loath each other, but they need each other... which one will win in the end?


Re: raft at sea

Your image reminded me a little of "Life of Pi," and conjures up a lot of visceral reactions. I can't wait to see where you will take it!


Re: staying in Gondor

Ails is a ranger, right? I was thinking that a small, coastal town would be just as foreign to both of them and require a lot of adaptation. So, even though they are still in Gondor, it's an entirely new life for both (?) For some reason, I don't see Jhanar being assimilated into everyday life in Harad...


re: Jhanar's leg injury

I have no idea about how far could he make it but would you like me to find out? Are you thinking of having him seen by a healer? Maybe someone in Pelargir can take pity on him?

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