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The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011

In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their sto

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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?


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"There's also the problem of health: Jhanar's got that leg injury, which really slows him down. I'm not a doctor, so my ability to estimate how far is too far is not very good. But GOndor isn't a small country, and I'm not sure whether even Dol Amroth is just too far for them to make it on foot, or even on raft (how much skill would two land-locked kids have with a raft if they made it out onto the bay?)"

Erchirion goes home at some point to see to things on the coast whilst Imrahil and Elphir are up in Tirith (I think that's what said in CMC) could he rescue them if he went by boat?

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