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The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011

In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their sto

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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?


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I promise this is my last post for the day!

Anyway, aside from apologizing for the typos in the previous entry (I did not preview and my autocorrect function pretty much took care of it...), I was thinking of a better way to phrase what I am trying to say regarding the direction after Pelargir, then the sea. At some point they would need to face some type of confrontation to then be able to earn redemption, whatever form that takes, not necessarily pardon. Maybe I am thinking too much along the archetype of the hero's journey where a final test/confrontation allows the hero to obtain the elixir/holy grail/etc. with which he returns to the world of the common day: a lesson.

Does that sound like a way you would like to take this?

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