The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011


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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?

Comment:
I would love to see Jhanar's thoughts on reaching the sea! Maybe they'll get their epiphany there. I think they are just too good, too honorable to be able to make a life having their desertion loom in the background (but I really hesitate to say this because I do not wish to influence your conception of their story).

But, if they are, I cannot see them anywhere in Gondor-- their past would catch up with them, eventually. Whe else in M-could they go, though? Further south would put them in enemy territory. Is there a way to get them somewhere up north?

They could also be faced with a situation there that would test them once again, but their experiences together have taught them that this time they can be up to it; somehow they manage to earn their pardon, thereby able to stay in Gondor (though Jhanar would likely have to stay as well. I doubt that Nara rim would ever receive him now).

Again, I apologize. This may not be what you are looking for, but thought I would just share it, in case it helps...

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