The Ailos and "Sunny" story - okay, now where?

By:Dwimordene
 June, 28 2011


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In 2009, I wrote "Beyond the Pale," about two teenaged recruits who abandoned Pelargir. One was from Harad, one from Lebennin. In 2011, for B2MEM, I tried expanding their story. Still trying to figure out how to do so successfully. Wanna help?

Comment:
I'd like to see more of the story, even if the drabbles just expand slightly into ficlets with a few more to fill them out, it doesn't need to be one story, more a set in a seris, it might even work better that way if you want to change veiw points.

I've no real points of confussion but I would like to know how they get on in Pelagrir.

Don't worry about oc's you do them very well, look at Reparation it's almost all oc's, in fact I thing you should probably try to get Andrahar's name on the search bar he's in so many fics on here!

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