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Comments on The Roots of the Ivy.

By:Aranel Took
 January, 16 2006

Any comments on The Roots of the Ivy?

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I'd love to know what you think of the story. Did you like the characters? Did you have a favorite? What were your favorite parts? What parts didn't you like? Anything you want to tell me.


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 [1] It's over!

Is there a sequal?

I liked all of it, the first couple of chapters where a bit rough, your writing has developed quite a bit all the way through it.

I mentioned in the review that a family tree might be a good idea but other than that I don't know

Nargil
Posted:Jan 16, 2006 16:45 GMT  Reply to this Comment


 [2] Hi Nargil,

There's still six chapters to go, so not done yet! :-)

Yes, there are sequels. I will start posting the revision of The Course of Love within a week or so. The story following that, The Wanderers, is still being written.

I'm glad you think the writing has improved. It was tough to revise this story (which has a billion structural problems) without doing a complete re-write from scratch. The original version was worse. Much worse. *shudders* I think each story is an improvement--writing-wise--on the previous ones. So I am getting better! ;-)

Thanks for the comments,

Aranel Took

Aranel Took
Posted:Jan 16, 2006 17:35 GMT  Reply to this Comment

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