Comments on The Roots of the Ivy.
By:Aranel Took January, 16 2006
Any comments on The Roots of the Ivy?
I'd love to know what you think of the story. Did you like the characters? Did you have a favorite? What were your favorite parts? What parts didn't you like? Anything you want to tell me.
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Is there a sequal?
I liked all of it, the first couple of chapters where a bit rough, your writing has developed quite a bit all the way through it.
I mentioned in the review that a family tree might be a good idea but other than that I don't know
NargilPosted:Jan 16, 2006 16:45 GMT Reply to this Comment 
There's still six chapters to go, so not done yet! :-)
Yes, there are sequels. I will start posting the revision of The Course of Love
within a week or so. The story following that, The Wanderers
, is still being written.
I'm glad you think the writing has improved. It was tough to revise this story (which has a billion structural problems) without doing a complete re-write from scratch. The original version was worse. Much worse. *shudders* I think each story is an improvement--writing-wise--on the previous ones. So I am
getting better! ;-)
Thanks for the comments,
Aranel TookPosted:Jan 16, 2006 17:35 GMT Reply to this Comment